Silvestri Fountains

*** The message of this piece has been shown in fewer lines but many poets have written long pieces like mine ***

Inspired by a piece of the score by Alan Silvestri in the movie "The Polar Express" http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0B6B4_h-i ...

[Title] Starlight, Star Bright

Starlight, star bright suspended in still air
Twinkle gently like diamonds in the sky
Luna Halo, silver hair crowning
Sprinkled with flames burning inside when deploying
Dashing through the hills of virgin snow
A flurry of blows scattered deep in December
Amazing grace, how sweet and happy
joyful songs of the heart may vary
Where a lamp to light in this cold night and the crystal
Amazing place beyond the sky
Who is spreading like wings of angels fly
Dream for eternity
You do not want to come see

Standing mountains, Grand majestic peaks
Reach in the darkness triumph over pain and painful
Fountains flowing love that we all seek
Wrath deployed, a look in your unbelief
Peace will come to all on this night
Those who proclaim the holy order
Amazing grace, revealing very
choirs are joyful joyful
Where is the lamp light in this cold night and the crystal
Amazing place beyond the sky
On the wings of angels flying without doubt
Dream for eternity
You do not want to come see

North winds whip hard and moan about
Crisp and needles, a sorcerer can collect
flashing crimson curtains that I found
Hurting heart beat, miraculous things happen
Beams of light from the moon shine from afar
Are wrong when we were lead over
Dreams are calling from the distant star
The constellations are where we dream of love

Starlight, star bright, sparkling in the air
Watered flames burn like candles in the sky
Luna Halo, silver hair crowning
Sparkling streams flow from head to feet when our
Washing o'er the virgin white clouds
Just the voice of peace and the lifting saying good night
Amazing grace, how bright and light
You calm the storm that howls so wild
Fall asleep in our eyes, we walk in the sky
Amazing place beyond all time
On the wings of angels flying forever
Can we dream forever
Soon, we will come see

We reveal the joy
Dreams come alive
Dreams will be live, you will
Starlight, star bright, may you shine tonight

I read it several times .. I keep getting lost somewhere in the poem .. It is beautiful and each line has the beauty ... It is your poem and I am not criticizing ... I wonder ... can you make it and a little louder? .. You're on something really good .. just give it more speed .. thank you .. I'll give you a star of your own:)

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I think I read your stuff before. My comment on it - it is sized for length, yes. " I think you need to win the right to this - as my old standby example, Robert Frost.

Secondly, it does not grab me - I think yer other commands do not take me anymore. So - I do not know why I should read it. Long line 4, I do not even know what I read. Something simple: (And I do not like poetry that makes me feel stupid because it is on my head. And visual as it should have a deeper meaning and if I do not understand - so I must be stupid. Na man.