Porcelain Deer

Hello!

I write a story, and I need help guys. Always so often I do some writing exercises by putting a theme for me and write a history of meeting the requirements.

This time the plot takes place in London yesterday. A young girl who comes from a wealthy family in Russia is suddenly bankrupt, his father died, and his mother disappeared after a fire in a horrible night. (? A better idea? I am missing mother, money, and the father died ......) So, my main character is the girl who lived there. I intended to go to the Orphan House, before escaping and start working as a maid for a family, but who knows where it will take me? ;)

Some questions I need help:

~ If she has brothers or sisters? I thought of the fate that disappear / die in a fire ....?
~ What is the name of my main character? In addition, suggestions for other characters too?
~ Another plot idea?

The last name of the family is currently Baranova, but if you can suggest names for everyone and anyone that would be great.

Main Character Description: (So far. Changes can please please please be suggested)


Name: First Name Middle Name _____() _________() __________( Baranova?)

Age: About 13 or 14

Parents: _________ _____________ and Baranova

Personality: A little outspoken at times; __________ is generally quiet and shy, like all women should be good (direct quote from her mother) She loves nature and books. She would like better than to sit in the family library, mellow, with a window open and a cool breeze blowing, sipping tea while reading a book. :)

Appearance:

Eyes: very large, as "the eyes of deer caught in headlights, cold blue
Face: white porcelain (white ash), with a delicate nose ski, heart-shaped, with prominent cheekbones that could cut ice and full lips
Hair: red / orange, not like a carrot top, but many shades of red, thick curls and loops down the middle back
Figure: cute and very small
General appearance: a bit intimidating porcelain doll, as


possible names so far:


Rozalii <----------------- i like this
Ana
Magdalina <------------------ I thought this one for another girl, perhaps the Orphan House
Katja <----------- i luv that one


Thank you!

I think she must have a lot of brothers and sisters who have been lost, but one or two with his return to England. Maybe I Katja Magdalina be appointed and a sister or a brother named Asa.

Unless you have extensive experience in the "old time in London" and an even larger context in Czarist Russia, you'd better put the story elsewhere. Looks like you're loving names of Eastern European origin and with you based everything on that. Bad choice.

You have not written a story. You just hit a few ideas. It is for you to write the story. If you do not know where to go with him on what you have now, there is obviously something missing that you can solve this problem.

Book of Ruth in the Bible: a woman marries, her husband lives in another country, when she returned home with her husband to have a life in the new land. She and her husband have one daughter. Death of husband and by tradition, the woman (Ruth) should go home in Moab. Daughter was born in the country and the father can stay, but decided to go with his mother in Moab. They get there and are poor - with no money, no home, nothing. They enter the fields of Boaz, a wealthy farmer, and eat by choosing the grain in the harvest. Boaz sees them, invites them to a meal, like Ruth, possibly m.